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PostSubject: Jaymaru/Rina   Jaymaru/Rina Icon_minitimeMon Nov 25, 2013 7:48 pm

Name: Jaymaru/Rina

Gender: Female

Age: 16

Personality:  Jaymaru has a split personality as a effect of the science her father did on her and the use of her semblance causing her to have a more feral and insane side to her that fights her for control over her body. Jaymaru is a easily distracted girl who would stop in the middle of something that is interesting one moment for something else. Jaymaru is really active and always on the go. Jaymaru loves playing around in the open even though she had no friends. She thinks that she'll befriend someone while playing in the open. It's the best place to find people of all ages. Next to that she thinks everything happens for a reason so she stays up on her feet. Jaymaru is a super hyper child who loves to get into things she doesn't have any business getting into. While on the other hand Rina is one of those kids who looks down on life. She's deadly and loves to torture people. Rina is rather unnatural; enjoying people suffer. Rina doesn't talk but does what most wild animals do to people. Because Rina is the feral side of Jaymaru when she sees something shiny she becomes intrigued by it and next to that Rina eats any and everything.

Bio: Jaymaru parents were both Hunters. Her mother name was Uzume also know as Lust for her lust for killing and her father name was Tetsuya. Lust was one who graduated top of her class giving her a reputation of being a nerd until it was time to enter a battle were everyone in her class thought she was a easy target to fight. During a training exercise Lust killed a fellow classmate earning her more of a reputation in the school of beacon and banning her from combat training. During a regular day in class Lust meet Tetsuya he was 6'10 with seafoam green hair. Tetsuya was the quiet one who would stay around the scene of a fight to collect DNA of each Grimm he killed so he could determine how he could easily defeat each Grimm so he didn't have to put his team at risk of danger. Tetsuya was apart of team TAKA while Lust was apart of team SELT. When Tetsuya and Lust married they still went to the school of beacon not as students but as teachers of the school. Tetsuya became a instructor who taught about the grimms and how to handle them without putting yourself at much risk. Lust was pregnant at the time with Rina and couldn't teached her class. After the birth of Rina Lust took Rina with her to her class were she took her students outside in the forest to collect Sap. While outside carrying Rina, Lust encountered a Grimm unlike the others knowing nothing but fighting she received a call from Tetsuya telling her to capture the Grimm for his own personal studies. Agreeing to that request Lust puts Rina into a carrying Pack for babies. It took Lust two hours to whittle the Grimm down without killing it. Born Rina Mara she was the only child of the Huntress Lust and Hunter Tetsuya. Because of her pigment-less skin she couldn't go outside as much into the sun and being the Daughter of Tetsuya he wanted her to learn from him and become a scientist instead of the killer her mother was known for being giving her the reputation that she was given at the school. Rina never really understood why her father never wanted her to be a huntress like her mother. at the age of five Rina started going into her father's lab trying to see what was it that made being a scientist so exciting. Around the time she turned six was the time her mother died protecting her from the Grimm that was in Tetsuya's lab. Before dying Lust used her weapon to put her symbol on Rina's right eye so whenever she joined the Academy of Beacon they would know that she was the only child and Daughter of the Huntress Lust and the Scientist Tetsuya. For more assurance Lust gave Rina her weapon NightShade to have when she joined Beacon. Tetsuya slowly would start to put more attention into his work of trying to understand Grimms and what their motive was by taking DNA of his own daughter and mixing it together with the Grimm to get it to talk like a human determine a way to destroy the Grimms. While driving home one night from a club with Rina in the passenger seat, Tetsuya crashes into a dust shop sending Rina flying out of the window into the dust igniting it causing the store to blow up while her father was already out of the store stumbling about until he saw his daughter flying out of the store into a steel rod severing one of her major arteries. Not knowing what else to do he takes her into his lab taking blood from the Grimm that he had since she was little he started to do a blood transfusion with Rina. At the age of Eight Rina started to become deformed starting with her eye color going from a lightly noticeable Heterochromia to a extremely noticeable one, and etc. Rina started to develop a strange appetite and more of a feral attitude that seems to please her father. Rina didn't have any clue that her father planned her destiny from the start. Months later Rina was slowly developing another side of her that was more violent and dangerous. A year later while playing with her dolls switching to the other person, Her father rushed home grabbing all his working looking at Rina he grabs her by the arm telling her to hold onto all this dust while daddy is gone outside for a while. Holding onto the dust her father ignited the dust around the house. blowing up all the evidence of his failed studies and plans to create a new world. Still sitting inside like she was suppose to do Rina's other personality took over trying to find a exit out of the house. During her years she was adopted multiple times having a different name each time until she decided that there was no place for her except the one place her mother told her to go. Rina remembered that when she was little her mother told her about what she used to do and about how well respected and feared she was at the school and she would be able to get into the school with the items she left her. Before going to the school of beacon she started to learn about mechanic and how she could give herself a chance of joining. She built one new weapon to go with her mother's weapon nightshade.

Physical Appearance: Jaymaru has bat wings protruding from her back due to her bat faunus side from her mother's side . She has a black tail . Jaymaru skin has no color and is paler than any other pale giving her the distinctive appearance just from her skin color. Jaymaru is only 4'10 feet tall and weigh in at 106. She wears a one piece suit with distinctive markings on it. She has a silverish purple hair color that stops around her neck when she has one of her personality change and when she is her talkative self she has pinkish blue and white hair with a moon in it that stops in the middle of her back. She has a few strands of hair that sit straight up in the center of her head and then the hairs curl at the end looking like a question mark.

Clothing/Armor: Jaymaru normal wears a one piece outfit under her her second layers of clothes which comprise of a skin tight shirt with a pair of black short skin tight shorts. While her other personality prefers to wear a pair of tiny black leggings and a black bikini top with her everyday black reversed spiked collar.

Semblance: Jaymaru Semblance allows her to make a two clones of herself that allows them to fight and protect her from damage

Color Represented: Blackish Purple

Fairy Tail Represented: Demon of the Red and Black Mist

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PostSubject: Re: Jaymaru/Rina   Jaymaru/Rina Icon_minitimeMon Nov 25, 2013 8:13 pm

Well 0-0...
The name of the mother bothers me... "Lust" isn't something generally considered acceptable to name a child.
Vytal has shown no signs of having the ability to create hover-technology, so Hover Board is a no-go.
The Teeth are a bit much, as having two rows of teeth would prohibit normal speech, and the sharpness do not work on human mouths, as the insides and tongue would be cut up immaculately. Please try to pick a specific color for a Color. The invisibility and phasing through objects is too overpowered. We have enough people with mechanized arms, to the point where the uniqueness of the concept is looking to be challenged, and the complete 180's in personality are a bit sketchy <0-0>
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PostSubject: Re: Jaymaru/Rina   Jaymaru/Rina Icon_minitimeMon Nov 25, 2013 8:36 pm

Fixed
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PostSubject: Re: Jaymaru/Rina   Jaymaru/Rina Icon_minitimeMon Nov 25, 2013 8:47 pm

Again, the mother's name is a hang up for me personally, and the personality is too contradictory of itself.
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PostSubject: Re: Jaymaru/Rina   Jaymaru/Rina Icon_minitimeMon Nov 25, 2013 9:07 pm

I fixed it
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PostSubject: Re: Jaymaru/Rina   Jaymaru/Rina Icon_minitimeMon Nov 25, 2013 9:33 pm

The personality does seem a little overboard, but if you at least pass it off as a legitimate disorder, such as Schizophrenia, that would be more acceptable.
I'd also ask you place a limit on your clones, such as having one or two, with only a certain amount of the character's Aura power, as having a seemingly unlimited number of clones still seems OP.
While I'm a little sketchy about how the character is, but so long as you don't abuse the system or cause too much of a scene with the character, those are the changes that I ask you make.
In the future we ask that you correct and edit all suggestions a Mod/Admin asks you to make, as well, to further speed the Accepting process.
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PostSubject: Re: Jaymaru/Rina   Jaymaru/Rina Icon_minitimeTue Nov 26, 2013 12:00 am

Fixed just didn't add the schizophrenia in it since it will just show
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